i wanna be the perfect imperfection of a picture perfect painted set
instead of a winter represented without a cigarette
making the lighter wieghin in the pocket useless
tatted up wrists in some cuffs, staged as an artist losing to an illusion of a city with warmer weather and stars about born in them
re-written the stories of being the sole supplier of pavement streets where come up
was written by success we havent tasted yet
I love the line "perfect imperfection" it's so great!!
ReplyDeleteI love the line "perfect imperfection" it's so great!!
ReplyDeleteThis poem was really deep and had a great vivid description. I love the line "tatted up wrists in some cuffs."
ReplyDeleteThis was such a deep poem. I love the quote "was written by success that we haven't tasted yet." That was so thought provoking.
ReplyDeleteI had no idea you had it in you, Andrew. Short but powerful.
ReplyDeleteThis was an-amazing poem. Good Job Andrew,(:
ReplyDeleteI love "I want to be the perfect imperfection".
ReplyDeleteIt can twist your mind trying to figure it out, but at the same time, it makes perfect sense. What a strong line. Nice job!!
That's exactly what I was thinking! I couldn't have worded it better.
DeleteIt was a great poem!
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh. This is so deep. I love it! It's so funny to read something so deep because I grew up with you and you were always the funny fat kid! Love ya, bro! And I love this poem!
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